Thursday, 19 March 2015

Swimming Poetry

Kereru Swimming
 

Written by Jessie
 
Kids shouting for their team.
Parents cheering for their children.  
Very cold water and the lane ropes on my body.
Swimming in March is fun.  
 
Wet Day
 
 
Written by Lorena
 
Parents supporting their kids while they are swimming,
Splashes of the water coming to me while I swim,
The cold water against my skin,
Swimming in March is fun.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

6 comments:

  1. I love your title Jessie by Logan

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  2. I like the way you described your swimming day. From Mrs Wade

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  3. Cool poem Lorena. I like your sentences and words !

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  4. I like how you used adjectives Lorena
    from Jasmine

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  5. I like how Jessie described what the lane ropes felt like when you were swimming in the pool.

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  6. It was fun at the swimming carnival by natasha

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