Thursday, 19 March 2015

Poetry Writing

Splash and Dash
 
Written by Ayush
 
 
 
People swimming in different obstacle races,
Children screaming loudly like an angry man,
Goose bumps popping and covering my body,
Swimming in March is fun.
 
Wet day!
 
Written by Kiana
 
 
Children swimming in the cold water,
Children cheering for their teams,
My soft towel against my skin,
Swimming in March is fun.
 
 
 
 
 
 


5 comments:

  1. That must have been a tiring swimming carnival !

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  2. I liked your adjective "like an angry man" Ayush, it made me laugh.

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  3. I like the way you wrote it Kiana from the tittle to the ending. She used 2 adjectives(cold and soft). she felt the coldness during swimming and after she swam, she felt the softness of her towel.I enjoyed the tittle with exclamation mark.By: Suganthi Senthoorvelan

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  4. I like your title Ayush. From: Simran

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  5. That is not a adjective that is a similes. From: Simran

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