Thursday, 19 March 2015

Poetry Writing

Swimming in March
 
 
Written by Natasha
 
Bright tents standing up and children cheering for their team.
Parents cheering for their children.
Water on my body and the splashes.
Swimming in March is fun.
 
Kereru swimming
 
 
Written by Jasmine
 
Parents supporting their kids and cheering for them.
 Water splashing around me,
Kids freezing every time they go in the pool.
Swimming in March is fun

2 comments:

  1. I agree with Jasmine. The water was freezing Cold! I thought I'd become a Popsicle! !

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  2. The swimming was fun.

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